"Daddy, I had a bad dream." You blink your eyes and pull up on your elbows. Your clock glows red in the darkness—it's 3:23. "Do you want to climb into bed and tell me about it?" "No, Daddy." The oddness of the situation wakes you up more fully. You can barely make out your daughter's pale form in the darkness of your room. "Why not sweetie?" "Because in my dream, when I told you about the dream, the thing wearing Mommy's skin sat up." For a moment, you feel paralyzed; you can't take your eyes off of your daughter. The covers behind you begin to shift.
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some creepy pasta
Iceyfeet1234- Warrior
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- Post n°2
Re: some creepy pasta
Sounds YUMMY
Monsoon- Warrior
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- Post n°3
Re: some creepy pasta
There's a sentence that doesn't make a lot of sense.
Monsoon- Warrior
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- Post n°5
Re: some creepy pasta
Not an actual sentence, but, "skin sat up"
bmarocks123- Soldier
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- Post n°6
Re: some creepy pasta
the thing wearing Mommy's skin sat up." , you are post to make a image in you'r head of what it is that is what creepy pasta's are for
Monsoon- Warrior
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"you are post to make a image in you'r head of what it is that is what creepy pasta's are for"
That doesn't make sense at all.
That doesn't make sense at all.
bmarocks123- Soldier
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Re: some creepy pasta
creepy pasta's are made to make you think what is going to happen or what is going to happen to him. they will not tell you exactly what is happening."he thing wearing Mommy's skin sat up." giving you a idea of a ugly monster wearing you'r mothers skin.
Monsoon- Warrior
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- Post n°9
Re: some creepy pasta
I know what creepy pasta is. Your sentence structure just doesn't make any sense.
bmarocks123- Soldier
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Re: some creepy pasta
then you must not get it then.
Monsoon- Warrior
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Re: some creepy pasta
No, I get it. It's just that you leave out punctuation that is important, so it is hard to understand.
bmarocks123- Soldier
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Re: some creepy pasta
Ok what marks did i miss
Monsoon- Warrior
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Re: some creepy pasta
you are post to make an image in you'r your head of what it is. that is what creepy pasta's pastas are for
bmarocks123- Soldier
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Re: some creepy pasta
talking about the story you said it made no sense
Monsoon- Warrior
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Re: some creepy pasta
We already discussed it.
bmarocks123- Soldier
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yes and you said it made no sense yet you don't correct the creepy pasta."No, I get it. It's just that you leave out punctuation that is important, so it is hard to understand." i ask you what marks did i miss and you don't correct the creepy pasta.
Slider568- Warrior
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Re: some creepy pasta
Lol I just realized BMA's pic is from Seinfeld.
Monsoon- Warrior
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Slider568 wrote:Lol I just realized BMA's pic is from Seinfeld.
"I seriously hope you don't do this"
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